Original Version (147 words)
The last night with the missionary Sin mi sun in Korea.
Today, I went to the elder Choi's house to meet missionary Sin before she go to Cambodia. we made a plan of talking during staying over night and decided to come together on the church at 10 pm.
Although I hurried to go to church on time by bike, a little late when I got out home. So I went fast. This ride was more long then first ride because passed the Guro station. But there is a bicycle path along the Anyang stream from Guro to church, It is not difficult than what I thought. It took about an hour and half to go church and I arrived there without accident.
Then we went to the elder Choi's house by hers car and talked with missionary Sin all night. It was a very instructive experience.
Corrected Version(Capitals)
The last night with the missionary Sin mi sun in Korea.
Today, I went to the elder Choi's house to meet missionary Sin before she RETURNED to Cambodia. we made a plan of talking during staying over night and decided to come together on the church at 10 pm.
Although I hurried to go to church on time by bike, IT WAS a little late when I LEFT home. So I RODE fast. This ride was LONGER then first ride because passed the Guro station. But there is a bicycle path along the Anyang stream from Guro to church, It is not AS difficult ASI thought. It took about an hour and half to go church and I arrived there without accident.
Then we went to the elder Choi's house by hercar and talked with missionary Sin all night. It was a very instructive experience.
The last night with the missionary Sin mi sun in Korea.
Today, I went to the elder Choi's house to meet missionary Sin before she go to Cambodia. we made a plan of talking during staying over night and decided to come together on the church at 10 pm.
Although I hurried to go to church on time by bike, a little late when I got out home. So I went fast. This ride was more long then first ride because passed the Guro station. But there is a bicycle path along the Anyang stream from Guro to church, It is not difficult than what I thought. It took about an hour and half to go church and I arrived there without accident.
Then we went to the elder Choi's house by hers car and talked with missionary Sin all night. It was a very instructive experience.
Corrected Version(Capitals)
The last night with the missionary Sin mi sun in Korea.
Today, I went to the elder Choi's house to meet missionary Sin before she RETURNED to Cambodia. we made a plan of talking during staying over night and decided to come together on the church at 10 pm.
Although I hurried to go to church on time by bike, IT WAS a little late when I LEFT home. So I RODE fast. This ride was LONGER then first ride because passed the Guro station. But there is a bicycle path along the Anyang stream from Guro to church, It is not AS difficult ASI thought. It took about an hour and half to go church and I arrived there without accident.
Then we went to the elder Choi's house by hercar and talked with missionary Sin all night. It was a very instructive experience.
